I feel the veil of darkness
as the night is settling in.
It is getting tighter and restrictive
Around my chest and throat.
It prevents me from sleeping
Sure hope it won’t go any further
I think I know what it is
And hope that I am wrong.
Peace and serenity
Lawrence Copyright July 2018
Beautifully written, so poignant and touching. You are a very good writer. Keep doing this!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much, your compliments make me blush and happy. Do you really think that I am a talented poet?
LikeLiked by 1 person
I believe everyone of us has that potential. If writing poems has become a new-found passion of yours you will necessarily be good at it. Your poems are heartfelt, therefore, authentic. That is why I like them so much. To write very good poetry implies having read and reading a lot. Our writing reflects our most inner fears and it is passion and therapy, so let us keep doing it. Also, I think you could publish a book later with all your poems and texts. This would help other people who are also bipolar. In this respect, your work is a great contribution.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much it went straight to my heart You too, write with passion and sincerity.
I will definitely write a poetry book, I need to write more. I currently wrote 89 poems.
And hopefully, it will have the impact that you mentioned.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’ve felt the same way before and I’ve written a poem similar to this too.
LikeLiked by 1 person