Before reading, please bear in mind that it is my FIRST EVER poem. I dedicate it to Saumya Agrawal from Randomness Inked and Auroraboros who strongly suggested and challenged me to write poems which I finally did. I am deadly scared to publish it but sometimes, it is good to get out of your comfort zone.
Theme: LET IT BLEED
It was sharp and cold.
It cut them all.
It bled profusely.
Didn’t feel guilty.
Felt relief.
Will soon face my belief.
Peace and serenity
Lawrence
Being bipolar. 
Not too bad for your first. Wow.
This is such an interesting piece of work. I love your style of writing, it makes me love this community even more. I followed your Page and I hope you could follow back. Keep writing!
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Thanks you sooooo very much. Your kinds words of encouragement mean so much to me and yes I will carry on with it.
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Thank you so much. I love reading your posts, I don’t always leave a comment so I apologise for that. I hope you could follow me as well.
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I will do it right away. Thanks for taking the time to read my posts.
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Well done!
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Thank you very Ashley. Comming from you, it means a lot. I was so scared to click on the publish icon!
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Hey Lawrence, I just read your latest post and thought that I should catch up on your blog because I wanted to know about the positive vibes that you mentioned in today’s post. And I happened to discover this! I am on cloud nine right now.
Really happy that you gave poetry a try finally.
And about the poem, it speaks millions of things to me. It’s simply beautiful. Just hoping that none of your words have your personal experience.
Sending positive vibes your way 😇
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Your comments fill me with joy and reassure me as well on my capacity to writing poems. Your compliments put me on cloud nine. You have no idea how much they mean to me, especially coming from you. None of them are from experience except the fact that I tried to commit suicide a few times but not this way. I still encounter dark thoughts but I promise to the Forces and my family that I won’t do it again. So no worries there.
I am sending you great vibes from the French mountains. 🙂
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I’m glad to see you showing so much positivity 😇😇
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I have to work at it but my desire is to leave this negativity for good and I know I am capable of doing so.
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Yes that’s the spirit! 😇
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🙂
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Reblogged this on Randomness Inked and commented:
Lawrence at Being Bipolar wrote his first poem ever and dedicated it to me. That’s so sweet of him! Have a look at it and shower some love 🙂
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I am writing this thank you note with tears of joy. This is the truth without exaggeration. I am so honored. Thank you, it means so much, more than you can think
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You’re welcome dear 🙂
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Good job Lawrence! Nice to see you stepping out of your comfort zone. Keep it up!
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Thank you and I will carry on and do my very best but I can’t guarantee optimum quality! 🙂
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Nicely done.
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Thank you so much.
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